In this updated version of my presentation I worked to make the composition a bit more cohesive and aesthetically pleasing. I started by making some text a smaller font and a gray color so it does not distract from the drawings. I removed some irrelevant site information from the first page and put in a selection of images from previous schemes to help show my train of thought throughout the process.
Overall, I was satisfied with my work and had a lot of fun, in particular, creating my in-site rendering. I was able to make my process and design intentions very clear without adding too many images or filler. Some things I would change, would be to change a couple things in the design itself, particularly in articulating some of my joints a bit better to show how the surfaces flow into each other, creating a more cohesive structure.
